saabh vs CIOMOFUGLA (engleza) - [BATTLE INCHEIAT]

8 versuri, XYYX, primu la 3 voturi, reply 10 zile.
Bafta.

battle me? 21 dicks up you're ass, you're like: Jackpot!
i'll cut your head off, and then fuck it like jack&pot
pierce you're eyes with needles, mercy for this sitting duck?
ok..i'll put it back, you could say: thanks for the 'heads up'
on papper i'm like scissors and rock, you're searching mad as fuck
a way to beat me but never find it, like you're girl's g spot
so listen carefull slut, in this battle you'll just start showing
that you're like a nasty storm, you won't stop blowing

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jack around with this kid bar, he’s damn serious about his beef whith my avatar
lil’head cut off smacks him hard, just so people realise what an actuall fag you are,
ain’t need for needles, don’t see ya panches anyway, i look at you and see a dick
a storyteller-slick rick, my bars are more ill than all records from duckdown music
Like scissors cut it with the damb, muh’fucka OG i m redman cause I rock da spot
just like snow white open your mouth and the dwarfs are all like… bitch take a 7up!
In this battle you face me, i’ll fuck you up–extreme pov, necro- porn rap in town
i put a smile on your face, clown, now your large mouth can make like bsb and get down

entourage call me vince chase out the bed your momma, cause i bring the drama
Bring the pain like meth and crush your karma, call me the bomb, who m i? -Osama!!!
murder you with my lyrical content-poison pen, that’s old news like it's strike at cnn
ass kicking like donnie yen, your punches are annoying, no one reads it like a spam
ain’t no playground ain’t no toy, looks like I'm playin like a champion the game boy
to be original you must suck my dick, the real mccoy, good blowjob you are employed
you ain’t got no vote, mouth on the mic, bitch this is porn rap and you got deepthroat
like yagami i put your name in death note, feels like a déjà vu, you’ re trapped in the source code

man, i want psychiatrist to vote this shit, to see who's iller
after the battle this bitch's like: meth, bring the pain killer!
it's like a thriller: action! i take his head and start plowin'
then i cut his artery, to defuse his ass but his still blowin'
punch throwin', half of them are sick, you're ass hole's like a pit
i put glue on my dick, that would explain why i'm stuck in this shit
listen prick, batman wannabe my time's the only thing you can save
another prade, fucks around with joker and then hides in his moms cave

Fratilor, nu votez pe bar-uri.
Ciomo: Se vede ca e prima data cand dai in engleza, ai greseli gramaticale care sunt la baza, in fine, 2 runde mediocre pot sa spun, ai o metrica lunga si asta nu-mi place.
Saabh: Dume bune, au fost 2 bar-uri ce mi-au placut, da si tu ai greseli gramaticale frate, unele ca si Ciomo, de exemplu: "you're ass hole", e defapt YOUR, mai sunt si altele da noah, n-are rost. Metrica buna.

Un battle mediocru, mai bine o dati pe Romana...
VOT saabh! A iesit in fata doar cu 2 baruri cat de cat.

saabh: 11

battle me? 21 dicks up you're ass, you're like: Jackpot!
i'll cut your head off, and then fuck it like jack&pot - 2 primul e cam fortat, dar merge...al doilea e dubios rau, nu-mi place...
pierce you're eyes with needles, mercy for this sitting duck?
ok..i'll put it back, you could say: thanks for the 'heads up' - 3 ok al doilea, dar ai cam irosit jumatate de runda pentru ideea asta...
on papper i'm like scissors and rock, you're searching mad as fuck
a way to beat me but never find it, like you're girl's g spot - 3 al doilea e bun, desi e cam facila ideea si am mai auzit dume de gen
so listen carefull slut, in this battle you'll just start showing
that you're like a nasty storm, you won't stop blowing - 3 ok, dar nu mi se pare de incheiere

CIOMO: 13

jack around with this kid bar, he’s damn serious about his beef whith my avatar
lil’head cut off smacks him hard, just so people realise what an actuall fag you are, - 2 cam incurcat dar sa zicem
ain’t need for needles, don’t see ya panches anyway, i look at you and see a dick
a storyteller-slick rick, my bars are more ill than all records from duckdown music - 3 intors bine pe ambele, desi cred ca puteai sa aranjezi asta cu 'duck down' sa fie si-un joc de cuvinte pe-acolo
Like scissors cut it with the damb, muh’fucka OG i m redman cause I rock da spot
just like snow white open your mouth and the dwarfs are all like… bitch take a 7up! - 4 primul mai de freestyle asa, dar dragut...asta cu piticii si 7up m-a facut sa rad
In this battle you face me, i’ll fuck you up–extreme pov, necro- porn rap in town
i put a smile on your face, clown, now your large mouth can make like bsb and get down - 4 atitudine buna, s-au legat si ideile bine

CIOMO: 11

entourage call me vince chase out the bed your momma, cause i bring the drama
Bring the pain like meth and crush your karma, call me the bomb, who m i? -Osama!!! - 2 hai sa zicem, pentru aia cu entourage - vince chase, desi puteai s-o mai coafezi...aia cu meth am dat-o si eu, asta cu Osama e prea facila
murder you with my lyrical content-poison pen, that’s old news like it's strike at cnn
ass kicking like donnie yen, your punches are annoying, no one reads it like a spam - 4 ) tare barul, poate dadeam 5 daca nu era cam fumata asta cu spam-ul
ain’t no playground ain’t no toy, looks like I'm playin like a champion the game boy
to be original you must suck my dick, the real mccoy, good blowjob you are employed - 3 e bun asa, dar cam haotic, nu-i aranjat ok
you ain’t got no vote, mouth on the mic, bitch this is porn rap and you got deepthroat
like yagami i put your name in death note, feels like a déjà vu, you’ re trapped in the source code - 2 suna bine dar nu spune prea multe, le spune prea simplist mai exact

saabh: 11

man, i want psychiatrist to vote this shit, to see who's iller
after the battle this bitch's like: meth, bring the pain killer! - 4 frumos inceput, intors tare
it's like a thriller: action! i take his head and start plowin'
then i cut his artery, to defuse his ass but his still blowin' - 2 asta nu-mi place, plus ca e fortata si rima
punch throwin', half of them are sick, you're ass hole's like a pit
i put glue on my dick, that would explain why i'm stuck in this shit - 2 ce nasol a iesit, nu-mi place
listen prick, batman wannabe my time's the only thing you can save
another prade, fucks around with joker and then hides in his moms cave - 3 cam fortat dar merge

Battle asa si-asa dar interesant. Ra' n-a fost intr-o zi prea buna, a avut cam cate 2 idei bune/runda dar cam atat. CIOMO a dat binisor pentru primul battle in engleza, prima runda chiar mi-a placut. Mi s-a parut ca saabh nu a luat battle-ul in serios, cred ca putea sa-l castige destul de lejer.

Vot CIOMO!

ra' ...?!?

Ra'= saabh??

silverapeakabadhabit a scris:ra' vs sandu, imi iau ciorba de burta ca dau battle c-o vita
cand scuip las multimea muta coaie, tu lasi multimea vida

silverapeakabadhabit a scris:vin alte vremuri, din prima runda esti papa, battle cu saabh sau ra'
stiu, doare de parca ti-ai prins pula-n desenu de pe sapca ta

Si mai scrie si la un battle pe echipe unde trebuie sa-si dea runda. Dar asta-i mai putin important

Hai baieti si aici cu un vot, doua...e la vot de 4 luni.

Mie personal mi-a placut mai mult saabh. E mult mai consecvent si parca ii curg asa versurile cum ar trebui. La Ciomo se vede intr-adevar ca e primul battle in engleza, niste dume bune pe acolo dar puse cam prost in text si cam multe greseli gramaticale. In plus, la Ciomo parca as citi cate 2 versuri de la artisti diferiti, daca vrei sa mai dai in engleza gaseste-ti un stil la care sa ramai. In fine, vot Saabh!

ba, asa ceva e imposibil ... inca un vot
s-a facut 2-1 ...

silverapeakabadhabit a scris:battle me? 21 dicks up you're ass, you're like: Jackpot!
i'll cut your head off, and then fuck it like jack&pot - 3 p. Primul vers ok, la al doilea am impresia că-mi scapă ceva, nu înţeleg referinţa la Jack & Pot.
pierce you're eyes with needles, mercy for this sitting duck?
ok..i'll put it back, you could say: thanks for the 'heads up' - 2p. Not really.
on papper i'm like scissors and rock, you're searching mad as fuck
a way to beat me but never find it, like you're girl's g spot - 2p. Probabil cel mai vechi punchline din meseria asta. Plus că engleza e precară.
so listen carefull slut, in this battle you'll just start showing
that you're like a nasty storm, you won't stop blowing - 3p. Aşa şi-aşa. În general, nu e bine să-l compari cu ceva distructiv, că ar putea fi interpretat ca autodrop.

CIOMOFUGLA a scris:jack around with this kid bar, he’s damn serious about his beef whith my avatar
lil’head cut off smacks him hard, just so people realise what an actuall fag you are, - 3p. Pentru primul vers, care dă dovadă de atitudine coioasă şi umor. Pe-al doilea nu l-am prins.
ain’t need for needles, don’t see ya panches anyway, i look at you and see a dick
a storyteller-slick rick, my bars are more ill than all records from duckdown music - 2p. Nici nu rimează, nici nu e punch. Plus că ăla cu "I look at you and see a dick" ar putea da naştere unui super-punchback. Să vedem ce face Saabh cu el.
Like scissors cut it with the damb, muh’fucka OG i m redman cause I rock da spot
just like snow white open your mouth and the dwarfs are all like… bitch take a 7up! - 2p. E cineva pe-aici care nu ştie bancul cu 7UP? Lipsit de originalitate. And WTF is "damb"?
In this battle you face me, i’ll fuck you up–extreme pov, necro- porn rap in town
i put a smile on your face, clown, now your large mouth can make like bsb and get down - 2p. Neaaah. Nuthin special.

CIOMOFUGLA a scris:entourage call me vince chase out the bed your momma, cause i bring the drama
Bring the pain like meth and crush your karma, call me the bomb, who m i? -Osama!!! - 3p. pentru tehnică şi primul vers. Mergea să pui Drama, cu D mare.
murder you with my lyrical content-poison pen, that’s old news like it's strike at cnn
ass kicking like donnie yen, your punches are annoying, no one reads it like a spam - 4p. Cel mai bun bar de până acum.
ain’t no playground ain’t no toy, looks like I'm playin like a champion the game boy
to be original you must suck my dick, the real mccoy, good blowjob you are employed - 2p. Slab.
you ain’t got no vote, mouth on the mic, bitch this is porn rap and you got deepthroat
like yagami i put your name in death note, feels like a déjà vu, you’ re trapped in the source code - 2p. Nu rimează, nu e punch, deşi putea să iasă ceva la faza cu source code.

silverapeakabadhabit a scris:man, i want psychiatrist to vote this shit, to see who's iller
after the battle this bitch's like: meth, bring the pain killer! - 5p. Bun tare punchbacku. Bravo.
it's like a thriller: action! i take his head and start plowin'
then i cut his artery, to defuse his ass but his still blowin' - 3p. Bunicel, dar nu rimează. o-ul din plowin se citeşte A, ăla din blowin se citeşte O.
punch throwin', half of them are sick, you're ass hole's like a pit
i put glue on my dick, that would explain why i'm stuck in this shit - 1p. No way. E aproape autodrop să zici că numa juma din punchuri sunt sick. Plus că e your, nu you're. Şi-n general nu văd punchul dacă zici că-l fuţi în cur.
listen prick, batman wannabe my time's the only thing you can save
another prade, fucks around with joker and then hides in his moms cave - 2p. Putea fi mai bun, lipseşte zvâcul final care să-l facă punch.

silverapeakabadhabit: 10+11 = 21 puncte
Ciomofugla: 9 + 11 = 20 puncte

Battle slăbuţ. Fiecare a avut câte un bar bun, diferenţa a fost făcută de faptul că punchback-ul lui silverapeakabadhabit a fost mai bun decât punchul lui Ciomo. Baftă.

Vot silverapeakabadhabit

CreativeEgo a scris:punch throwin', half of them are sick, you're ass hole's like a pit
i put glue on my dick, that would explain why i'm stuck in this shit - 1p. No way. E aproape autodrop să zici că numa juma din punchuri sunt sick. Plus că e your, nu you're. Şi-n general nu văd punchul dacă zici că-l fuţi în cur.

Donkey punch.

Battle incheiat, castigator saabh cu 3-1!

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